I love it, and i only do this to try and help a fellow artist and it is only minor things that i have noticed. the nose is at a slightly off position or perhaps the mouth. also the legs, i'd say that the position is just just barely off, i get that she's kinda slanted but still seems a bit off. I give vision a 4 stars because i think you've completed and captured everything you've set out for, originality idk if 3 and a half is harsh, wonderful but typical anime girl. technique 5 stars and impact 4 and a half because it is absolutely amazing, the mix and contrast of colours, they look 100% in place and together and this is the quality i personally hope to achieve. Far above any quality i would produce, i hope you consider this a fair critique.