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Artist's Comments

This was inked and coloured completely in gimp. (and inspired by many diffrent artists)
While having break I noticed in my works that internal yuck, that hidden blah... So I changed some things in colouring.

Critiques


:iconthebulletalchemist:
The clouds in the background and the overall shading in the entire image is beautiful. More specifically, I think you did a wonderful job shading her "outfit", also the shading on the ground is practically flawless as far as I can tell, and I also like the way you shaded her legs. Plus the pose is adorable! She looks so carefree, like nothing can bring her down. Though, I personally think it would be a little difficult to stand on your toes like that for very long.
Though this is totally awesome, there are a few anatomy problems. The hands and feet are too small. Hands are usually about the size of your face,though in anime and cartoons that's usually exaggerated to about the size of the entire head. The feet are about right, I think they should be just a tiny bit bigger, they should be about the size of the forearms.
The eyes are also a little on the big side, but I noticed that's a trend in your art that makes it very unique and gives it your own little flair, so I like that in your art. Gigantic eyes are actually harder to pull off than they seem, and you do it quite well!
I noticed in your comments someone said that the boobs are too small, but they actually look just fine. Not all girls have DD size bras they can hardly contain in their shirts and that's actually another thing about this particular piece that I like.
Overall this is quite the charming piece and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future!
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:iconmanipriscilla:
GIMP ????!!! this is with gimp ???!!
:wow:

you must be really good ... you should see my "moment of anger" ^^; it's in gimp but it's a mess

cool then :clap: keep it up
:iconhoney-bell:
I love this, it's so cute ^^
And the shading it great *3*
:iconbrandyrosa:
Maybe you should try the newest version?
orz thanks ^^

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:iconchocoloid:
Love the sky and overall picture makes me feel like going to the beach now... The girl is very shiny though- like an angel...but love her still!!

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:icondonchu:
this is beautiful~ i love the coloring and her hair flows so smoothly in the wind~
:iconmoniavi:
Śliczne tło, kolorystyka i cieniowanie skóry, szczególnie mi się podobają nóżki >3<

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:iconexoticfairygirl:
The coloring is beautiful!!! I love it! Nice job :)

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just beatyful :heart:

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beautiful, magical and free :heart: 9I don't know what else to say)

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Cute! ^^

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